Daily Literature Deviations - November 26, 2009

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Poetry




Featured by: TheBrassGlass

"Godhead" by ordie

This piece is just solid; through its distinguished
language and well-developed voice, it visits a
subject held very near many peoples' core beliefs.




Featured by: RunningBear5858
Getting A Hair CutThey all converse about their boyfriends and girlfriends or their lack of
And their deadbeat job
Or the boss that bellows at all the right moves
And the hairdresser hesitates not to make a comment about their boss
As their hands sink through the thick curls of a client
And the scissors snap as they attempt to make something
Out of something
And then they talk about all the money that will begin fall into their arms
Or out of their arms
And some pretend to be something they are not and pose a life not theirs
And all the gibberish that floats in the air
Means nothing
And the lies that infuriate the hairdresser like a pestering fly
And abrades their skin
Until they tell their client that they are full of shit
Gently
Or say nothing
Agitated
Everyone so foolishly inquisitive
Wanting to know more, more, more
Only to cause more trouble
But I think they like that
Or hoping the other will shut up
So they can soak themselves in falsehood
But without the absurdity of all their babble
And t

"Getting A Hair Cut" by insanewalk

A great poem about one of the simplest things in life;
getting a hair cut. Written  while waiting in a salon, the
author creates a humorous and entertaining poem with
great imagery.



Featured by teenyxtinyxtina
Black DressesBlack dresses
Pulled up to little girl's knees
Chasing after
Leaves; falling
Or
Dancing on
Breaths
Low slung
Black dresses
Pulled up to your thigh
High heels
Clacking
Through the parking lot
Chasing after
Dreams
You left in the bottle at the bar
That’s how I remember you

"Black Dresses" by ShutterbugShots

This poem is breathtaking as this piece contrasts innocence
and reality between the two stanzas. Each individual line
makes the reader pause for a brief second to consider
the effect of every word.




Prose




Featured by julietcaesar
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"i don't see the stars" by loveyoulater

The stark, casual and realistic use of language to depict
a conversation between a boy and girl throws sharp
relief on a subject matter that is dealt with sensitivity
and grace. A poignant, beautiful piece on pessimism and
optimism.



Featured by: Kitri-du-Lac
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"The Fly" by lulena

This piece will give the reader a shiver down their spine
as it is uncomfortably real. lulena removes the reality
barrier that protects the reader in conventional horror
pieces, and by slowly building the idea up from a trivial
matter, she gently touches the uncanny. The complex
language is well-used, forcing the reader to slow down
and take it in, prolonging a rising tension. A well
constructed and paced piece.



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Thanks for the feature. What a surprise! :)