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Daily Lit Deviations for May 23rd, 2013


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Poetry


Suggested by: ~failuresnirvana
Featured by: =DrippingWords

TemponautSundays: no one's butterflies are
going to affect the wavelength
of the sun magnifying ants
(nothing will happen anyway).

Rewind, the air wrinkles into
sundays: no one's butterflies are
stuck on weeping quicklime (not yet)
that doesn't hesitate; floor it.  

High-pitched tires are slashed by the
hissing water, parked sometime on
sundays: no one's butterflies are
run over by broken sunshine.

One last time to make this right, keep
blinking back - stop flapping its wings
'fore they reek like pelting rain from
sundays: no one's butterflies are...

"Temponaut" by =slowslicksnails

Suggester says: "I am suggesting
this deviation because the person
wrote this so effortlessly with beautiful
hints towards the butterfly effect. It is
definitely one of the best time travel
poems I have read on this website."



Suggested by: *homunculus888
Featured by: =TwilightPoetess

DysphoriaWe were prodigies of insecurity and
clashing ivory skin on ivory
love, love, love
(the syllables are strung upon your bedpost
like wringing hands and tripwires)
I'm synesthetic red and aching
with envy for your wretchedness and
I would be hard pressed to find you anything but blinding.

Dysphoria by ~ColorBlindSushi

~ColorBlindSushi brings the
feeling of unease--of being
caught off-guard by something--
to this piece with beautiful imagery
and a well thought-out metaphor.



Prose


Featured by: =SilverInkblot
Car RideRaises volume.
It's still too quiet.

Car Ride by ~creampuffluvr

In a quick snapshot, ~creampuffluvr
sums up every awkward car ride ever.



Suggested by: =TwilightPoetess
Featured by: =SilverInkblot

choose full or emptythis is new.

this is new in the way of shocked reflections and wailing newborns, in the way of new lovers and old flames, burning bright, burning fierce, burning out.  coals in the hearth and ashes on my tongue, tastes and flavors and prayers and curses, all burnt out.  their lives are gone, given up for cause after cause, and no one mourns the match that strikes a bonfire.  no one wonders what happens when a pouf of sulfur and oxygen and friction combine.  no one asks whether the match was ready, whether it should be saved or just do its duty. i wonder if emerson's books burned like this, if they sent smoke-prayers down to heaven or up to h

choose full or empty by ~SilverPhoenixFire

Suggester: "This short prose
piece takes some old metaphors
and re-imagines them.  The last
paragraph is powerful--and so, so true."


Featured by *doodlerTM
It Was a Dive     She finally went off the deep end. It wasn't a slow event. The girl looked at the olympic-sized pool first, knowing what little kids added there. That didn't make her happy, so she turned her back on it to stand, heels hanging over the edge of the diving board with only her toes plus the balls of her feet to grip it. Then she sprung to make her backflip dive.

    Penny made a clean dive -- barely any water splashed. She was proud of that, glad her brother watched it to make sure anyone interested would know. She came close to adding pollution to the public pool herself, she was so relieved.

    Penny climbed out to crow with her brot

It Was a Dive by *xlntwtch

A whimsical story about
achieving one's dreams.




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Daily Lit Deviations for May 22nd, 2032


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Poetry


Suggested by: *Concora
Featured by: =TwilightPoetess

Peach JuiceA cloud god
spilled his sun-glass of
peach juice.
Across the sky,
the orange frothed into
white strands,
like heavenly Morse code.

The solar drink thinned
into a beard-grey
until I'm in a
glass-black sea
and the moon is full,
an uneaten celestial crisp.

Peach Juice by ~AyeAye12

From the suggester: Quirky,
majestic imagery makes this a
delightfully intriguing piece to read.



Featured by: =SilverInkblot
i'm in love with a girl with six months to livei'm in love with a girl with six months to live
she did not tell me so
i knew from the hair i found in the bath
i knew from the emptiness when i held her

i knew from the wardrobe two sizes too big
i saw it in her face
she looked so thin, so exhausted
she looked so             different

i'm in love with a girl with two months to live
i live in the hospital
my days pass with hand-holding, saying
"it's going to be okay" (to me)
it's going to be a rough night again

i'm in love with a girl with one month to live
i can hardly bear to see her
but she's still
as beautiful as she always was

i'm in love with a girl with six months to live by ~TaiHizake

A melancholy piece that
will strike a chord with
anyone that's ever had
a loved one in the hospital.



Featured by =LadyofGaerdon
Extinct language.I fill myself with dead tongues,
rising through my gut and singing
streaming in a dancing line from my mouth.

Perhaps fictional tongues,
words wrapped in a world to never
exist.
Kings and elves
fantasy of the highest order.

Speak.
The words of long dead men
imagined men
A history vibrating through
the patterns of my mouth
a slow dance of my butchered inflection.

To know my words echo
the sentiments
of ages now come to pass.

Extinct language. by ~dextroannie

Every language, whether it came
to be organically or creatively,
is unique, and each contains its
own history and stories, just
waiting for us to discover them.



Prose


Suggested by: =TwilightPoetess
Featured by: =SilverInkblot

I thought I knew my death.I thought I knew my death. He grabbed my heart one day and squeezed tightly, banded fear wrapping its way around my body and terrorizing the air from my lungs. "Not..Like..This.." I would gasp, thinking that there must be some better way out. I would start to beg but it would soon be over. He'd release me and my body would give up. There would be nothing left to say.

I thought I knew my death. She would slip into the shadows some months before I thought my time was up. She would slowly take my memories for my own, replacing them with child's talk and nonsensical things. "Oh please, won't somebody help me." It would be a rhetoric, although I

I thought I knew my death by ^Kaz-D

Suggester: "This flash fiction
piece by ^Kaz-D takes an old
phrase and reshapes it, makes
it into something beautiful."



Suggested by: =schongslipper
Featured by: =SilverInkblot

My Paper Mache PersonLiving with you it felt like I could shatter at any moment. Even though I was the one who chose to stay I couldn't stand to watch you break over and over again. You were like the paper Mache people I made as a kid, too heavy to support your own weight. The funny thing is I never did learn my lesson and I would try again and again unable to make them perfect just like I could never fix you. Maybe its because we're both broken inside the same way mom was when brother never took his first breaths. It probably would have been better if we had never met. But, I wouldn't want to forget. Me and you we both filled our bodies with poison until we coul
My Paper Mache Person by ~dandiliondrifter
Suggester: "This piece revolves
around a metaphor and an
enticing style. It delivers a
truth a lot of us need to hear."




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Daily Lit Deviations for May 20th, 2013


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Poetry



Featured by =LadyofGaerdon
Villanelle Penned on the Cusp of a New WorldChildren follow you, hoping they will learn to soar, fly
on warm winds of dream. America, witness how far
you've fallen. How quickly you've forgotten Holden's rye

martyrdom, his gift to youth, as he sought to defy
Charon and the precipice of innocence. You scar
our children by letting them follow blindly. They fly

as well as any clipped bird, praying they endure dyes
of soot and snow, skin fissures induced by night. The stars
in their bodies lead with neither light nor warmth. The rye,

to which some turn, does the trick. It makes the strays decry
their masters, then lets them rest. Others begin to spar.
Some children still follow, scrawlin

Villanelle Penned on the Cusp of a New World by ~jswebb

In this poignant, highly relevant piece,
~jswebb wields his own creativity in defense
of the creative freedom of coming generations.



Prose


Featured by *doodlerTM
Choose Your Name“John Brant,” I whispered, and a dashing British gentleman appeared in my mind, arrogant and suave as the slim-fitting Italian suit he wore. He sounded classy, not overly pompous. But there was just something about him. He could be the cool confident charmer I was looking for. But he could just as well be a stiff stocky soldier with his pride shoved far up his ass.

“John Chase,” The name rolled smoothly off my tongue. Another man took form, both the same and different from the first. He was just as charming, perhaps a little lower in class with a bolder tongue. And was that a little mischief I saw in his eyes? Undoubt

Choose Your Name by ~yoursingingsatellite
An interesting piece that reflects
on how writers name their characters.




Suggested by: =TwilightPoetess
Featured by: =SilverInkblot


Fable"Where'd you get a name like that?" I asked her, the night we first met.

She shrugged nonchalantly at the question, like she'd heard it a thousand times before.  "I was simply born to tell stories."

Fable found me at the bottom of another empty highball glass in the darkest corner of the bar, as she drank rye and water through a black plastic straw.  Save for the drink, she didn't look like she belonged there.  She was more like a lost college sophomore, her ID likely the top card in her wallet.

"Can I help you?" I groaned, my head held up by both of my hands.  Elbows on the table; mother would not approve.  She took a seat across the tabl

Fable by *Laura-Lie

Suggester: "We've all experienced the pull of a certain story,
or character.  We've written them, written them again, set them down
and picked them up a third time years later.  They haunt us.  
*Laura-Lie experiments with this in Fable."




Suggested by: =TwilightPoetess
Featured by: =SilverInkblot


The Normal GuysAs he killed the engine, Fred let his heavy head fall to the dash.  What else would a rich man do but keep his sports car in pristine condition?  He'd seen all the rich guys drive around in their red Lamborghinis, arms around the shoulders of their cute blonde trophy wives.  Many smoked Cuban cigars and did at least fifteen over the speed limit.
It had been a week since the last time he'd gotten his car cleaned.  Going through a car wash still felt so ordinary, but how was he supposed to know where all the football stars and successful computer nerds went to get the job done?  Those privileged bastards looked so smug with their greased hair and perfectly waxed hoods.
The attendant tapped on the window.  "Sir?  Do you need directions?"
Fred rolled the window down and leaned his head out the window.  "No.  I'm exactly where I meant to be."
"Are you sure?" the boy asked, raising both eyebrows.
Fred nodded.  He knew the way to G


The Normal Guys by *SurrealCachinnation

Suggester: "This small snippet gives readers a glimpse
into the reasons some people go to the grocery store...
and just never come home."



Foreign Language


Featured by *lombregrise
Perdue dans mes penseesSilencieusement,
L'herbe me regarde grandir.
C'est remarquable.

Perdue dans mes pensées by *Alittlebitdreamer
"Perdue dans mes pensées" (Lost in my thoughs)
is a lovely haiku with an unexpected end. Great job!
There is no english translation, let's try this:
Silently
the grass is watching me grow.
This is remarkable.
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Daily Lit Deviations for May 19th, 2013


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Poetry


Featured by =LadyofGaerdon
A Bumblebee Among The PoemsA pale hand's reach
for long forgotten poets
unearths
dust soaked wings
sewn
on a stripped jacket.

Snown by ashen rays,
they soar towards
their birthplace.

Even my lantern
does not uncloud
the ash they long for.

They are looking
for their flower.
Not the sun.

A Bumblebee Among The Poems by ~Pr0metheusUnb0und

A seemingly ordinary occurrence is
made extraordinary through the words
of ~Pr0metheusUnb0und, who asks:
"Can they survive that long in the darkness,
surrounded by nothing but words?
"



Featured by =LadyofGaerdon
Ianthe speaksAccept the pain and suffering as part of the forging of your new self. Weak now as molten metal – treated with fire, treated with icy cold water – to become strong and hard. Broken and reforged in the white blaze.

Crawled into the burrow you'd dug for me – the one we'd shared – couldn't heal with your elbow poking my chin. Need to see the back of you, to redefine the space with my own body, to find new names for silence and fear. Emerge above…

What we feel as ash in our mouths is but dust of years stirred accidentally in the confusion of goodbyes. The closing door disturbed the pile of days – the flurry of nights. Curled under them I felt w

Ianthe speaks by ~RecordingAngel

I think many of us feel this way from
time to time, or when we slow down
long enough to allow ourselves to
feel, to recognize "the rut of routine
and comfort"
and come face to face
with the "hydra of endless identical days".
This malady of modern existence is
explored beautifully by ~RecordingAngel.




Prose


Featured by =LadyofGaerdon
Offering
Dax bent her head over the tiny dancing flames in her palm, trying to absorb every lick of heat she possibly could. The tongues of fire were small and weak, flickering on the edge of extinction, but she kept them alive through the sheer power of her will.

A particularly cold gust of wind caught her by surprise, breaking her concentration. With a hiss, the flames went out.

“No!” Dax half-shouted, half-groaned. She snapped her fingers, but they didn’t spark. She tried again, desperate for some warmth, but it was hopeless. Between her frustration and the cold, it just wasn’t going to happen.

She ran a hand through her

Offering by =Ambiguous-Catharsis

Tasked with creating a situation
to explain the strange predicament
of the subjects in the inspiring image,
the author spins a relevant tale, wholly
her own, and deeply engaging.



Featured by `thetaoofchaos
ChristophorusIt was one of those soirées where the smell of powder and pomades gave the baron Auerthal a perennial runny nose. The Burgundy wine and the nakedness of the female party made the men daring in their talk, the kind of daring that the baron only managed not to tiptoe off from thanks to his practice in rallying troops under fire.

«So, Monsieur le Baron used to serve in the Prince de Liechtenstein’s État-Major, correct? An exquisite gentleman. But tell me, please, you must have known the other aides de camp quite well – is it true that Monsieur Cantelmi had gotten a hole blown down there at Piacenza?».

«Pardonnez-moi?».

«A hole. Li

Christophorus by ~PlayinTheDead

Flush with wonderful details and brimming with
energetic dialog, this period piece wows the reader
with polished and meaningful storytelling.



Suggested by: *SCFrankles
Featured by: =SilverInkblot

Goodnight Enigmatic SongShe was the song you hear and, at first blush, don't like. 
Well, you don't know how you feel about it so you keep listening in an attempt to discover how exactly you feel and then you reach the end of the song and you realize, you don't like it; you love it. 
That was Grace.
She was my coworker and she was my friend.
We carpooled together, I drove and she slept most of the way.
"Don't get much sleep at night, do you?" I asked her, catching those drooping lids mid-descent.
"Insomnia, love."
She looked out the window streaked with rain; it spoke in percussive touches filling the car with quiet overcast conversation.
I felt the warmth of her smile in the corner of my eye. The blur of her hand reached at the window to feel the cold of the droplets.
"When I was a girl, I used to race these. I thought it was funny the fat ones always won," she giggled and I imagined her as a little girl in the passenger seat then, legs too short to reach so kicking, and hair messed in the bac

Goodnight Enigmatic Song by *0hgravity

Suggester: "The ordinary made extraordinary. A
story of friendship and lost love."






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Saturday Spotlight for May/18/2013


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Today's featured deviant is:
:star: *glossolalias!:star:


Questions

 

1. Tell us a bit about yourself and your writing.

I started writing as a way to purge emotions that I could no longer handle internally but did not want to discuss with other people. By the time I was sixteen, I realized most of my writing was utter crap and became interested in technique, theory, and most importantly, other writers. I also learned the value of editing, which I apply to my prose more often than my poetry, though I do put more thought into my poetry than I used to. Let's just say I'm no longer a fan of nonsensical emotionally overwrought word vomit.

2. How do you feel about dA as a literature community?

Of any website I have posted my writing on, dA is the friendliest. Almost all of the community members I have met are willing to not only talk about their writing but their ideas behind it. There is so much talent to read daily, and if one actively participates--commenting on others' work, offering critique, etcetera--it's easy to become involved.

3. What is your writing process like?

For my poetry, I usually start with an idea and let the words build themselves. I then edit the work until I'm satisfied with it, which is almost never. I tend to return to my poetry very often. My favorite is revising poems I wrote months ago, because I always have a new perspective on what I've written.

For my prose, I have more of a systematic method. I outline the plot, decide on themes and symbolism, and then flesh out the story from there. I also spend much more time editing it in the early stages, thought I'm less likely to return to the idea later.

Both of these processes involve lots of caffeine, but a few people have noted I'm a rather "prolific" writer. I have a lot of energy for what I do, and if I have even an inkling of an idea, I will try to write it. You never know if it's going to work until you try, and sometimes, if you start something, the rest of it will come to you either while you're writing or after you look back at your work later.

4. Are there any authors that have influenced your work?

So many, haha. Right now, I've been reading more contemporary fiction, including Sherman Alexie, Mark Z. Danielewski, Yann Martel, and Alicia Erian. I tend to read more prose than poetry, and I'm very drawn to realistic situations and spiritual contemplations. The ideas of human nature and frailty fascinate and that reflects in my writing and inspirations.

To be honest, I draw most of my inspiration from my life and the lives of others.

5. What advice would you give to a beginning writer?

Write often, edit often, and take the advice of writers you respect but don't lose your sense of style. You don't need to be like another writer to be successful.



Poetry


Census of Ghostshe now resides in susurration:
shaken from our summer sheets,
flags drawn taut and shuddering,
and wispseeds rising into the light
with their dressing gowns unbuttoned,
planting onto my lips that name
i've tried to hang with himself;

on a late morning,
while folding your laundry,
i found him again and held his tongue
when he yearned to speak of love
that once transpired in his passion,
or maybe it was the infatuation
of surrealists: brown skin but touched
upon each other,

marking the insignificant with brands
of remembrance: like the crinkling of
tinfoil or the crisping of smokers' lungs
or the thought that cigarettes are only
romantic i

"Census of Ghosts" by *glossolalias


Sixteen Sketches of Local Personhood one.

By Method of Loci, Nick remembers the different faces
of every man he's ever slept with, placing them like mannequins
through his childhood home. In the cluttered foyer is the boy who asked him
for his virginity, but in the attic, his husband of one year by law but many more
by virtue of dedication and love reclines against the diamond-shaped window,
backlit by dusty light while smiling with his arms wide open, his legs stuck straight like
The Cross that hangs beside him, a wooden thing abuela brought back from Mexico.

two.

Tamarah cleans the gutters with her hands because the hose
won't work like it used to and the sun beats down

"Sixteen Sketches of Local Personhood" by *glossolalias


Prose



All Truthsone.

Micah Deluca came out sophomore year.

He was standing by his locker, talking to a blond with a crooked smile and one fake tooth, feigning interest to stare at his biceps. The blond's name was Dylan Arnholt, and Micah had better things to do, but he was always polite and politer to handsome boys. Perhaps that was telling enough, but there was something effeminate about Micah: his straight dark hair, the impish curve of his pink mouth, the way he held his hips, his meticulously shined Doc Martens and tight bleached jeans. Everyone suspected he was gay, but no one knew until Dylan asked pointblank, "So, are you a fag?"

"Do you mean to as

"All Truths" by *glossolalias


Petty ReasonsI. Little Accidents

I scrutinize the jeans I scrape off the laundry room floor, trying to figure out if they're black or indigo; last week, Logan invited me to a party and said Willow would be there. While we still shared an English class, Willow said she liked to see me in black jeans and green shirts, but the only green shirt I own is dirty. I settle for blue and hope it’s close enough, checking the date on the calendar for the sixth time: Friday, July 18th.

Before I leave, I make sure I say bye to Jackson. He’s on the phone with a customer and waves his hand to shush me. A minute later, he covers the receiver with his hand an

"Petty Reasons" by *glossolalias




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Daily Lit Deviations for May 17th, 2013


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Poetry


Featured by: =DrippingWords
Mirror, Mirror on the wallMirror, mirror on the wall.
Forgive my vandalism.
Let not a thousand curses fall.

She needed to stop catching colds from smiling at her reflection in pouring rain.
While needing me to be more than her favorite tv show on black screens.
So I came to her, the one she considers the most charming of them all.

And I know it’s bad luck to break a mirror.
Yet these two souls unluckily found each other.
So the glass shall do nothing more than continue to fall.

But mirror, mirror on the wall.
If I must die young,
Tell her that she’s the fairest of them all.

"Mirror, Mirror on the wall" by ~uniquePoetry

She is the fairest one of all.


Suggested by: ^NicSwaner
Featured by: =TwilightPoetess

Road Trips Through Canyons"Can I tell you a story?"

The words slithered
from her tongue
wrapping around me
like a boa's perilous coils;
Suffocating me
to a point
where I could only
squeak out,
"Yes."

From then on
I took road trips
on the  deep grooves
of her voice.

Traveling on
unknown back routes
where sweet grandmothers
sold flavored honey
and desperate criminals
hitchhiked
hoping no one would find
the bodies they hid.

But all the bodies she hid
Were laid
deep in her skin
marked and covered
so  that no one
would ever find
the burial grounds.

Twisting turns,
Rapids
of her gravelly voice
filling my head with
avalanches,
on avalanches
of yet un-pursued know

Road Trips Through Canyons by ~TPak16

From the suggester: I can't quite
put my finger on why I like this piece, but I
do like it, and enjoyed it in its entirety. The
inspiration of slam poetry is clearly evident
throughout the entire piece.



Prose


Featured by *doodlerTM
The Best Orange She'd Ever EatThe plan was fairly simple and would not have gone awry had the old man from across the street not decided to bring her a bushel of oranges from the tree in his back yard. As it was the old man from across the street had decided to bring her a bushel of oranges and was now standing openmouthed in her doorway, the bushel of oranges fallen to the floor.

Shit.

She was sure he had seen everything, or at least enough, and (not for the first time) cursed the familiarity between neighbors that had led to his decision not to knock. Although even if he had knocked she could not have managed to hide the body in time.

One of the oranges rolled into t

The Best Orange She'd Ever Eat by ~starell

A succinct, shocking story about
consequences and oranges.



Suggested by: *Concora
Featured by: =SilverInkblot

Cassandra-81 C81 had a name once. It started with the letter A, she thought, or maybe it ended with an A. She didn’t know anymore; it was the first thing they took when she arrived at the Troy Institute. It had bothered her for the first few weeks, but the more she tried to remember, the more she seemed to forget. When she brought the issue up to the doctors, they repeated what they had been saying all along, that she could not be healed as who she was. To be whole again, she had to rid herself of her past identity and become a new person. They would give her a new name once she was ready.

She didn’t know how long it would take, or how long

Cassandra-81 by ~TheBloodyEpicPumpkin

Suggester: "An interesting little piece
with intriguing characters. I was enthralled
until the end - and I still am!"


Featured by =LadyofGaerdon
SummerEllie,

Summer is coming, you feel it in six year old bones sheltered beneath skin paled by flourescent lights and dusty shelves. She will call to you and attempt to lure you in with the promise of dry, dusty heat cooled by southern breezes; but you, so unlike your boisterous siblings, will dig in your heels and bury yourself deeper within tales with boundaries set in ink.

You will watch the seasons play out on your mothers face, placed there by the iron fists of your step father. Pink will turn to red, red to purple, purple to black, black to yellow and blue will hide beneath the surface; a kaleidoscope of colour that will turn your stomach

Summer by ~Lacewinged-Beauty

Issues of time and the
damage it inflicts, seen
through the "changeling
eyes
" of a child no longer.



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Daily Lit Deviations for May 16th, 2013


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Poetry


Suggested by: ~madameshadowenn
Featured by: =TwilightPoetess

labyrinth1

imagine you are at a labyrinth
you read about it in a book, or rather
read a book about it
                                  or from it,
                                                          that's not the point.
the point is that
you are in front of a labyrinth and the paths are crooked and covered with thorns
whilst the walls rearrange themselves each time you try to take a step.
you're not a hero and this is not an adventure but imagine
you want it to be;
the story you read leads to the hidden core and you want it to tell you the ending.
a hero would fling a hammer and bring the walls down;
we know you are not a hero.
they ask, 'i

labyrinth by ~Inzhuna

From the suggester: The imagery
here is absolutely incredible and I
was captivated by the flow and emotion.



Suggested by: *imaginative-lioness
Featured by: =TwilightPoetess

Away with naturelistening to lake waters talk,
they speak by splashing upon the rocks and stones.
and I only listen
trying feel their words...

their thoughts...

---
I'm trying to do this
all that once,

because
I want to be consumed
by all of it...

so I won't be able to come back from where I came from.

Away with nature by *CherishKay

From the suggester:  The opening
lines will have you gasping. *CherishKay
has written one of most beautiful poems
about nature I have ever read.



Suggested by: *Concora
Featured by =LadyofGaerdon

Sijo for the Snake I Am and the Mouse I Will BeBy noon, I’ve forgotten how to breathe; so to learn again I glide,
bend but do not break grass blade backs to watch him work, feel my girlhood
sloughed like a snakeskin in the reeds, see my womanhood like a mouse.

Sijo for the Snake I Am and the Mouse I Will Be by =AzizrianDaoXrak

Suggester: The imagery of
this piece is so effective it
leaves goosebumps. A very
interesting take on a semi-obscure
form, and well worth the read!



Prose


Suggested by: ^NicSwaner
Featured by: =SilverInkblot

In Which Middle School is HellI can still remember with perfect clarity the day in eighth grade when a boy walked up to me at my locker and said, “Hey cutie.” I was sweaty, having just come from gym class, and I was only at my locker to buy some time before I had to go to math class where the teacher hated me and the numbers didn’t make any sense. But there was a boy standing next to me and he called me cute and I had no idea what to say. But I didn’t have to because the girl he was with just laughed, a cut off cackle into the oversized purse she was fishing through. I turned back to my locker, not saying a word because what could I really say anyw
In Which Middle School is Hell by ~Melpyra

Suggester: "There are many expressions
for insulting those with weight issues,
but none more insulting than "Fat chicks
need love too." This writer exposes the
phrase for what it is and what it does to the victim."



Featured by *doodlerTM
The Lake in Late June“Come on, Freya! What’s the worst that could happen?”

Ricky Cartwright had been Freya’s neighbor ever since his family moved into the house whose backyard met Freya’s around three or four months ago, and their families had slowly grown closer ever since. He was probably around Freya’s age—fourteen or so—with hair that was a much darker brown than Freya’s, and hazel eyes whose color was indeterminable.
He’d been pestering her to come to the lake for weeks.

Now, here they finally were, after Freya finally gave in. Ricky was already in the water, shirtless, his white t-shirt lying on

The Lake in Late June by ~WritingRebel

A sweet and well-written
story about falling in love.




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Daily Lit Deviations for May 15th, 2013


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Poetry


Suggested by: =AzizrianDaoXrak
Featured by: =TwilightPoetess

Van GoghSlip into
the first vestige of
morning, the
blush of a summer's
day already aglow
along you—

your silhouette
glistens, an aureole
of molten gold
as sunflowers puddle
at your feet.

Van Gogh by *Concora

From the suggester: I think
this piece is simply STUNNING.
The description is so rich but
gentle, like buttercreme icing.


Featured by =LadyofGaerdon
cypress lady.Lost in a fog, a stranger walks.
Dressed in shadows,
she creeps.

Alone, she whispers
nondescript words in a language
no-one hears,
for no-one cares to listen.

In the shade
of an ageing cypress tree,
she lies beneath the boughs.
In the soft, soft grass,
she sighs as she dozes.

The sun hides behind a cloud,
and the quiet shadows grow cold.
As she opens her eyes, she shivers,
her grassy bedding turning to ice
as she is lost to the pleasantries
of dreams.

She looks out,
and from the realms of her shadows
can see a faint light
past the leafy threshold.
Standing, she walks
slowly to the edge,
staring out.

She stretches her

cypress lady by *Lychalis

Wonderfully expressed rumination
on lifting the veil, the boundary
between shadow and sunlight,
and the threshold between
apprehension and acceptance.



Prose


Featured by *xlntwtch
Demon Adoration Edit Part 1Demon Adoration Edit
Chapter 1, Part 1
An inch of virtue; a foot of demon.
He waited in the dark, in the shadows. It had been years, years since he had tasted fresh air, since he had felt the warm, sticky feeling of blood under his claws, since he had heard the crunch of bones snapping and the screams of humans echoing in his ears. Yes, it had been a long time. Three hundred and seventy years, two months and fifteen days to be exact. He was a monster, a demon. When released, he was bound in slavery to whichever human freed him until that human died or sent him back. He had been released in mistake by those thirsting for the water that sat

Demon Adoration Edit Part 1 by ~dragonawakener

Great writing keeps readers
engaged in a plot unfinished
as known, but guessed at.



Featured by *doodlerTM
Like Glass"It's like glass, I suppose," he told them. "The kind that is strong, but can still break, like on windows." He paused and cocked one head to the side, thinking. "Okay, maybe more like windows on a rainy day. You can sorta see through them, but you sorta can't, you know? Anyway, it's like that. Not so easy to break, but when it does-"

He drew back a fist and slammed it into the window in front of him. They all watched as it shattered into a million pieces around his hand, the small and large glass shards cutting into his hand and wrist, making them bleed. The glass and bloods pooled around his feet, also bleeding from the cuts, but he didn't

Like Glass by ~Bluebellwriter7

An interesting vignette on
pain and broken things.



Featured by *doodlerTM
Say It.Come on, Mike, how hard is it to tell him that you know? Every time he leaves, the words come back to me. “Luke, I know who you are, and it’s okay,” I say to myself, just like every other time, as I walk away. I bang my head against the wall a couple of times when I get home and up to my room. What’s wrong with me?
***
It’s on the tip of my tongue to say something to Jim. It always is. I mean, we’ve been dating this long and I haven’t told him who I am? Of course, if it goes badly, I’ll either have to kill him or erase his memory. And I really don’t know which would be worse. So I put it off again, letting him go home, wondering if he’s happy.
***
“Jim, are you sure you want to be with me?”
“Y’know, I’ve always wondered why you call me ‘Jim.’”
“You use my middle name.”
“Yeah, but why shorten ‘James?’ Unless ‘Luke’ is short for some

Say It by *TheBrokenBride

A short yet shocking piece about
how some things aren't as they seem.



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Poetry



Featured by: =LadyofGaerdon

Snow Queen
Holding hands with permafrost
what time became was never lost
sleeping, weeping, what's the cost

She's the keeper of my key
let silence carry forth my plea

She never even touched the ground
said so much without a sound
snowing whispers all around

She's the one who calls to me
with Olly-Olly-Oxen-Free.


Snow Queen by *dagoth-jeff
 
With an opening line that instantly pulls the reader in,

and all the haunting mystery of the image that inspired it.


 

 

Suggested by: *imaginative-lioness

Featured by: =TwilightPoetess


Stardust.I partook in the poison
of your miracle, for
I believed you a magician:

You pulled chronic weariness
from my marrow—

my faith,
from hazy depths grown
too accustomed.

The eggs spoiled fast:
you pulled from your hat
an act of distrust,
and you left me

with stardust,

with stardust.


Stardust. by ~Nullibicity

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unique piece of poetry. With the last two lines repeating,

the ending has a wonderful impact.


 

 

Prose



Featured by *doodlerTM

three dogs in the churchyardThe chain link around the graveyard runs straight through an oak tree. The bark looks crippled where it passed through the wire--mutilated in a faint diamond pattern--but you can see around the edges where it's fusing together smooth again.
The kids with the distant eyes always come here to smoke. You've never seen eyes like that. Distant, but not glazed, like they're looking into eternity and watching the threads of livewire possibility arc and writhe before them. The embers at the ends of their smokes cast cherry-red reflections on their irises.
The top of the fence is buckling where it enters the tree. You wonder if they'll have to cut it loose if they ever take it down. You wonder how far the roots have crept.
You wonder why the kids with the forever eyes never stand, vulpine, by the churchyard with its stray dogs and subterranean hum of faith--of vulnerable hope. Maybe all the life drowns out the eternity.
On winter mornings, they exist only in the pinpricks of light from the ends


three dogs in the churchyard by *disrhythmic

A peculiar revelation and reflection on life and what eternity is.

 

 

Suggested by #WritersInk

Featured by *xlntwtch


Candy at a Funeral (Short Story Version)“Forgiveness is the fragrance
that the violet sheds on the
heel that has crushed it.” -Mark Twain

When I saw the lemon drop in her prune-y hands I didn’t know what it was for. But Grandma just hobbled over and pried it into my hands. She left me with that gram of candy like it was a piece of God. As if holding it, the rain on the hearse and mausoleums would turn sticky and clear as light. As if the sky would softly bruise blue and hold itself as I tasted it. She looked at me as if the yellow sweet in my hand was the only precious thing I had left in the world.
And I thought, “why not?” popping it in my mouth


Candy at a Funeral (Short Story Version) by ~TheGlassIris

 

Per the suggester: It's rare to find stories about funerals that

look on the up-side of things. This writer presents a unique outlook

through the eyes of a child. Rather than bemoaning the unknown,

a brighter future is envisaged, telling us that life is what you make it.


 

 

Featured by: =SilverInkblot

when people ask me what it's like to fall in loveit's that feeling you get
when you're sinking sinking sinking

-

you learnt how to swim an age ago. floundering by yourself in that salt water by the cold grey stretch of land. i can picture you now: pink fingers and wind bitten cheeks, teeth chattering and clattering inside the cavern of your mouth because it was just simply too cold.

stubbornness. it was, wasn't it? and it didn't seem to matter then - and it matters even less now - that you swallowed about three buckets of water that day and you came home with eyes the same shade of red that a tomato is.

but you kept trying anyway because someone told you it would be important later on i


when people ask me what it's like to fall in love by ~acariad

This lovely piece of prose poetry has a fantastic closing line.

 

 

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Poetry


Featured by =LadyofGaerdon
BloomIt's normal, you know.
Bruises flower under skin like lilies in a garden
Tears find their place just like water in the soil
They seep into the black
Nurture seedlings
And hurt grows so green and natural.
Pearl skin is supposed to go purple
It's as right as the rain.

So don't worry, don't fret
I'm art, you know, cross-stitching on the wall
An ivory piano key
Just as I should be
Because battered things are beautiful.
Feathers torn from silk pillows
And stick figures on balance beams

Aren't as loved, nor as adored,
Nor as beautiful as me.

Bloom by ~dance-of-aquaiu

In ~dance-of-aquaiu's lush metaphorical
exploration, "battered things are beautiful",
and made more so by her beautiful words.



Featured by `thetaoofchaos
Bait and SwitchBougainvillea blooms
and tall, shaded ferns disguise
this sorrowful life.

Bait and Switch by *Medoriko

Nature has duped the poet -
an eloquent victim.



Featured by `thetaoofchaos
communicateit took a thousand paper planes
to defeat the silence;
aching through stubbornly
vacant ephemera,

(   but nothing lasts forever -
the world is quick to remind you   )

it took a hundred thousand questions
to produce this listless answer

yet still you are insatiable
incorrigible, glorious and true
in your imperfections

and so you dance, alone
unfettered in the dusk,
pirouettes in the dust; for

there is no-one left
to whisper with you
anymore

communicate by =susurrousity

We should speak our mind,
even to long dead light.




Prose


Featured by *doodlerTM
Character - NewlywedsHe gestures to the unadorned apartment door with a smile, “May I, Mrs. Sarah Orcken?” She performs a small, unpracticed curtsy in return, her white bridal dress crinkling softly at the hems.

“If you would, Mr. Jorden Orcken.” He walks to stand beside her, bends to sweep her into his arms and with some effort picks her up off the floor. “Although technically, I don't claim your name until we get the papers back.”

“Details.” He takes a few staggering steps back toward the door, “Could you get the door Mrs. Sarah Orcken?”

“They still don't make these things with pockets Mr. Jor

Character - Newlyweds by ~Cobrateen

A great exploration into
a newlywed's relationship.



Featured by *doodlerTM
Did I Kill Your Puppy?    I didn’t know how to do CPR on a puppy, but I tried. After I pulled Smokey out of the swimming pool, I held him upside down and smacked his back to force water from his lungs. Only foam came out. I tried chest compressions – thirty, like I would for a baby – but his ribcage wasn’t shaped like a baby’s, and I wasn’t sure I was pushing in the right place. He didn’t respond. I covered his foamy muzzle with my mouth and puffed one-two-three. No change. I repeated this until I realized I was wasting my time. I gave up, hugged his wet body and cried.

   Did I kill your puppy? I guess so. But I don&rsq

Did I Kill Your Puppy by ~kbyshimru

An incredibly poignant and touching
non-fiction piece about permanent regrets.







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Saturday Spotlight for May 11th, 2013


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 :star:*beeinthebottle!:star:


 

Questions

 

1. Tell us a bit about yourself and your writing.

I edit for a living, but my first love is poetry; I prefer to think of myself as a poet who daylights as a professional editor. I also write some creative nonfiction and other prose. I began writing in third grade, although it was my sixth grade teacher who really inspired me. She gave me an “empty book” and told me to fill it with my poems. I stopped writing when my life got too busy—the house, the husband, the kid, the cats—only to start again in serious about 3 years ago.

2. How do you feel about dA as a literature community?

dA is often thought of as a teen site, but in the lit community, there are subgroups of all sorts of folks. The flipside, of course, is that some people find the lit community to be too fragmented. As a mature writer (read “older”), I feel lucky in that there’s a subset for folks like me, too, which has really helped to further my writing. People have been very kind and supportive here.

3. What is your writing process like?

I have a bad habit of writing, then overediting, then putting half of it back. As an editor, I’m a perfectionist, which can be good when dealing with issues of craft and really bad when simply trying to get words on the page.

4. Are there any authors that you feel have been an influence on your work?

I’d like to say maybe T.S. Eliot and Sylvia Plath, but as much as I admire them, they haven’t found their way into my writing. My writing was most influenced, in my teens, by a little known pop poet, Merrit Malloy, who had a very straightforward, personal style. Poet Ed Skoog, [link], taught me most of what I know about crafting poems. I took a couple of classes from him, including a master class in poetry. Any missteps I make are all mine, though.

5. What would you consider your highest literary accomplishment to be?

It’s yet to come; I haven’t accomplished much, at this point. I’d love to see my poetry out there more. My goal for this year is to be published more widely, especially locally. I’m most pleased about appearing in Cascadia Review, which is a beautiful online journal that has featured a ton of more-published poets, including Washington State Poet Laureate Kathleen Flenniken.

Poetry


North StarI want a window
facing the North Star

so I can dream
I am sailing
toward the galaxies,

instead of anchored,
like the tide,
to the moon

"North Star" by *beeinthebottle


SliverYou were once a lightbulb,
a skying bird,
the truth
behind the story,

a sparkplug,
an anchor,
the answer to a dream

Last time
I looked behind,
I saw you standing,
hazy;

a peahen
caught between
control and finery

You were once a highway flare,
a sparkler,
the western wind,
the moon—

you were once
a sliver of the moon

"Sliver" by *beeinthebottle


TransubstantiateI hold you in my hand,
a cup of water, overflowing
(no water into wine, this),
transmuting into vodka

You, a stiff drink I did not expect,
a tired burn in my throat,
blue fire running from my hair
and down my thighs

to fizzle where my leather boots
brace, embedded in burnt earth

“Transubstantiate” by *beeinthebottle


Prose



MirrorI'm sitting in the pub, and a song my mom often sang to me when I was growing up comes on, "Que Sera, Sera." Will I be pretty, will I be rich?

My mom dragged me to the orthodontist to fix my teeth, the dermatologist to fix my skin. I looked out the window and dreamed.

Where do those dreams of pretty and rich disappear to as we grow older? Shoved down like the covers when we go to sleep. I've outgrown the wish to be rich and have almost outgrown the need to be pretty. A pair of tall, black boots and some jeggings, a cute tee on top, and I'm ready to rock.

Almost.

My daughter asked me, tears in her eyes, why I make myself invisible, why I f

"Mirror" by *beeinthebottle





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Poetry


Featured by: =SilverInkblot
MiracleIt was a sleepy, weightless
late winter afternoon with nothing
going on and with no one to talk to;
I lay on my bed as the washed-out
blue became more nuanced, and
the ticking of the old clock drove
spidery nails in the silence.

The sun moved into my room and shone
on my face, filling me with the hope
of a coming summer - and I understood:
there are no miracles, just minutes that
fight harder against oblivion before
sinking forever into the sea of memories.

Miracle by ~helice93

Lazy weekends are the 
best kind of weekends.



Suggested by: *Concora
Featured by: =TwilightPoetess

castle-buildingshe always finds me
at the edge of consciousness
  -when i am
        falling
asleep to the sound
of her soft voice
filtering from the kitchen
   -as she clinks her mug
        softly
trying not to wake a soul

i thought i hated
caffeine
until i met her

now i long to be
the 3am coffee
that kisses her
  goodnight

castle-building by ~AnotherPassenger

From the suggester: This is tender caress 
of a poem is brimming with a quiet, wistful beauty.



Prose


Featured by *xlntwtch
An Ephemeral InterludeIt was quarter-after six at the Nook and Cranny Inn. The evening breeze filtered in from the half-closed door, dappling the bar room with dusky light. It was as lively as usual, especially ever since three soldiers came in for a reprieve from the harshness they endured. It didn't matter that the three were so out-of-place in a small bar like this, which was usually the haunt of the local sell-swords and miscreants; they were only interested in getting away from the bittersweet task at hand with some much welcome camaraderie. The atmosphere was a vibrant mix of cheery laughter and small-talk, and none of the patrons gave their odd company more than a second glance. Such was the town's respect for the warriors that protected them. For a short while, it was as if the war didn't even exist to the band of weary soldiers. The Nook and Cranny may as well have been a sanctuary from enmity.
The two men, a jolly, scarred field medic called Ragnar, and the eager, child-like sniper, Ace, sat at op

An Ephemeral Interlude by ~AbsoluteDragon

Fine writing tells this short fantasy 
"interlude" of three soldiers at rest from war.



Featured by *doodlerTM
SylviaSylvia made it past her sixteenth birthday without ever touching a drop of alcohol. She had never been to a party. She had never done drugs. Your classic “good girl,” she desired perfection, saw her future as something she needed to work towards, and enjoyed the act of learning to a point that she was often teased. As she drove home from taking her ACTs, she knew that part of her identity was about to change. She didn’t, however, know how drastic this change would be.

Mary and Grace had been trying to drag her to a party since freshman year. But it was Elliot who finally convinced her.

“Come on, babe, it’ll b

Sylvia by ~ranza123

A sinister story about lost relationships 
and the kind of anger that could lead to death.



Featured by *doodlerTM
The Malaysian MagicianOnce upon a time, there was a magician whose name nobody agreed on. Some people called him John Tan and some called him Tan Chang Ming because only the British called him John. Not only was John Tan the first magician in Malaya; he also prevented the Japanese from invading the country. First, he summoned the ocean spirits to push their boats away from the shore, and then he commanded the waves to crush the boats and sink them. You could see the shadows of the Japanese soldiers diving into the turbulent ocean, hear their frantic shouts as the high waves pushed them farther from the shore and the spirits pulled them down. At daybreak, the Japan
The Malaysian Magician by ~J-ko

An entrancing reflection on magic 
and culture and the importance of remembering stories.




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Poetry


Suggested by: ~slowslicksnails
Featured by: =DrippingWords

summer homei've rearranged the rooms of my chest
to make room for you.
i won't say it didn't hurt
to make myself your Adam;
removing rib
after rib
until you found a comfortable perch.

there, beneath my unguarded breast,
you construct your nest of
every lovely thing you've come to love
about me
(while the rest of me flaps wildly
like moth wings against the cold walls
of my exposed heart).

i should've known you'd leave
when winter froze me.
don't apologize [for the ache].
you kept the beautiful bits of me
warm
(while they died).

"summer home" by *Hfeather53

Suggester says: "A remarkably beautiful
poem. The word choice was strong and
powerful, which helped make the meaning
very well-executed. Also, the poem takes
a few common ideas and turns it into
something fresh. This poem definitely
stands out from the crowd. "



Featured by: =LadyofGaerdon
Dance of the (rainbow) white, rainbowBedecked in white, she came,
Silent footsteps melted as she beckoned;
'To winter cometh thee' said she,                                                              
And taunting, teasing uttered: 'Thou cans't resist me';

Come stay a while in my silent, calm and quiet woods,
Come rest a while, lay your weary head upon my drifts;
I'll crown thee with my flakes,
Resplendent jewels of heaven made;
And finest flutes of old oak trunks I'll play,
Sing a mournful tune of old, with wolves for baritones
And creaking of the branches, under heavy load, for rhythm;

Come Play my love,
Your crown of fire dazzles me, even if it burns,
Your fo

Dance of the (rainbow) white, rainbow by ~ChildoftheBeat

With enchanting images and words,
and lyrical, spell-like rhythm, this
poem is gorgeous and magical, just
like the image that inspired it.



Featured by: =SilverInkblot
How To Live In Halfi am learning how to live
without the right side
of my body
the better side
the side where my shoulder
touched your shoulder
while we slept

that's how to quit
smoking
they say
relearn how to live
without having a cigarette
to remind you how to
breathe
or not
breathe
or cough like you've
been coughing
since you were
fifteen

they say
to quit any
bad habit
you must get up
in the morning
without it
and you must
have breakfast
leave for work
come home
and go to sleep
without it

they say
sleeping and waking
are the worst

i am split in half
and learning how
to fall asleep without
our s

How To Live In Half by ~Asherlee0099

Learning to live without is easier
said than done, as this eloquent
poem demonstrates by juxtaposing
a bad habit against the sense of loss.



Prose


Featured by *xlntwtch
Smokin'The room was steaming. Literally. That’s how Iris liked it when she got out the shower. She couldn’t bear having windows open and letting in cool air, there was something much more therapeutic about letting the room fill to the brim with hot steam until she couldn’t tell whether it was shower water or her own sweat trickling down her spine.

Besides when you were blessed with a gift that let you see more than you should be able to it was nice to be surrounded by haze, even if it was just for a moment.

She stepped out of the shower, smelling of floral soap that wasn’t her own, and wrapped a towel firmly around her midd

Smokin' by ~TheMoorMaiden

Short and sweet fiction about
why a particular sort of person
chooses her own poison.



Featured by *xlntwtch
To Write A StoryMy brain felt like a bomb- any second it could simply explode. I tried my hardest to think of something, something to write but I couldn’t! A little massage, some cookies, soda; none of them worked. It was getting late, and a story had to be written.

“How do people write stories so fast?!” I said aloud, raising both fists into the air.

“Shut up!” was my divine reply. Now dad wanted to know why he was never in my stories.

I had to write another one. What were some ideas? I decided to start simply. I could write a story about my dog Pluto! Nope, did that already. Many times already. Cross that out. What about my

To Write a Story by ~Pauper-Circumstance

Many writers suffer from a little thing
called writer's block. This circuitous
and funny flash fiction may teach
several how to get started again.




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Poetry


Suggested by: *Concora
Featured by: =TwilightPoetess

Sravana VarsaI'm broken branches
in forest trenches
keeping you safe throughout war
I'm hidden rain-songs
lyrical diphthong
trembling by the cooling shore

The sky is running
with ghost clouds gunning
at the clueless masked lovebirds
The moist earth swells up
filling leaking cups
with our fruitless crippled words
 

Candlelight flickers
leave souls to wither
as my bones set in for night
Prevernal daydreams
undone at the seams
tease you and wind you up tight

My hair is guided by the sea's deep sighs
My skin is summoned by the auburn glow
We took a vow to live without goodbyes
My hair is guided by the sea's deep sighs
I hear bells resounding like last

Sravana Varsa by =Sammur-amat

From the suggester: This is
beautifully envisioned poetry -
and the two forms utilised fuse
flawlessly to create a piece of written art.



Featured by: =SilverInkblot
starvetoday, i don't hate myself enough
to deny the hungers for -

distractions
a cup of coffee that will treat me like sin dancing to the pulse of my bloodstream
food
the absence of guilt
cracks in personality
screaming poems silently at my reflection
silence

today, i will gorge
on the things i vowed to give up.

today, i will break vows.

today, i am a glutton
for relapse and binge cycles,
for starvation and changing reflections.

tomorrow, i will wish
i could be the skeleton that
hangs in my closet.

[ leave the tears where they lie,
take the fallen stars and ripped up wings,
do not regret spinning circles
around vices. ]

starve by ~catching-cinderella

Eating disorders are a day to day
struggle as this piece reminds us
with it's "today" and "tomorrow" stanzas.



Featured by: =SilverInkblot
a poem about driving in pennsylvaniaI'm driving west and at the state line all I can see
are canvases of steaming light waiting to be painted
in the brushstroke forest that lies like a crescendo
across the reservoir where the grass washes over our ankles
and my eyes will never open so wide again.
June 12th had all the markings of a fine poem:
thick music scattering lights to the night city
reflecting in the same warm cadence of breezes
and your head resting on my bony shoulder.
You asked me with such sweetness if you could read my poems,
but please don't leave me with my love, with the cats
spilling out of your arms into the contaminated water
of taking in the divin

a poem about driving in pennsylvania by *archelyxs

A simple subject with evocative
images paints a peaceful, resonant
scene of road-tripping down empty
highways with that one person.



Prose


Suggested by `FuzzyHoser
Featured by *xlntwtch

Levee LandThe thing about living in Louisiana is that you no longer see beauty in the cypress, the slow muck of water, the brilliant blue of the sky.  You see that the trees are new growth and skinny, tall and ready to topple.  You see the refrigerators abandoned on the banks and you know that the only reason the sky is so blue is because of all the vapor in the atmosphere and you curse the humidity.
I allow the scenery to blur, the truck ka-thunking over the expansions on the Three Mile Bridge while I sip water from a plastic Mardi Gras cup that was marked in sharpie “In Memory of Lana,” the black strokes scratched from washings. 
She had died on this bridge.  She was kidnapped from the local bar by her angry ex-boyfriend and he bashed her head on the concrete pilings and tipped her over the side.  It was a strange way to dispose of the body, actually.  There was no water below, just a long drop to dry land and weekend camps.  Then the boyfr

Levee Land by *linaket

Per the suggester: A reader can't
help but be enveloped by this story -
imagery rich and full of heart.



Suggested by Anonymous
Featured by *doodlerTM

The End Will Suck Ch. 1Entry 1:

Flouride in YOUR Drinking Water: How the Government Will Erode Your Mind

Ellery paused, her index finger hovering over the shift key. Maybe Illuminati and the Music Industry would be a better article for June. Rifling through the stack of papers on her desk, she looked over her notes. There were several articles on flouride, a few on the subliminal messages in Rihanna's new album, and one on Monsanto.

Sipping from her boxed juice, Ellery scrolled through her comments feed. Of her 23,567 viewers - 6,425 of which followed her blog – only 948 people had shared her last article on off the grid living. 342 liked it.

“'L

The End Will Suck by *TheStorageGnome

From the suggester: "'The End Will Suck"
is not your average vampire story:
Ellery has a unique spin on her afterlife."



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Poetry


Suggested by: ~valkvick
Featured by: =TwilightPoetess

IcarusHand me those keys
I don't think it's right you drive

She shot me a glare
jumped in the drivers seat and shot off
faster than I could mouth -
Be Safe.

It was thirty minutes later when we found her
body bent
hanging out of the windscreen
blood clawed down her dress
with a lump of a belly hanging out,

and John turned to me and said
'I think she's with child'
and I wanted to laugh and tell him 'No
it's just an addiction to Oreos'
but when it comes to comedy
you've got to pick your moments

and as we heard the baby screaming
in the muted palms of her dying breath
I knew that no audience
would even summon a sympathy laugh for me
as my hope of

Icarus by ~Broadcraig

From the suggester: It's simply an amazing poem.
It never backs away or takes a soft view on the brutality
of its subject, and the imagery is really well done.



Suggested by ~SedahLiah
Featured by: =LadyofGaerdon

the lady's wrathhe mocks your thoughts - [his future bride]
there thrusts aside
in public deride
the stately grace you hold inside

his sadistic ego stuns your pride
with brutal remarks - blurted - snide
such disrespect
you must not further abide

face shading red
you eloquent
vent vitriol
vituperation
threaten his being
via leveled invective

he stutters - turns pale

  this pleases you!

it's plain to see
externally blanched
he's internally charred

but just to make sure
you broil him some more

  so!

your burning rage
has turned his page

stripped and flayed
drawn and quartered
embalmed, entombed
bricked and mortared

displayed
disbursed
dissipated

 

the lady's wrath by *alapip

Suggester: Here's one of my favorites from *alapip, whose writing
is well-crafted but perhaps  outshone by his ability to go back to his finished
pieces and edit them further, chipping away at the hot iron like a poet-blacksmith.



Prose


Suggested by ^NicSwaner
Featured by *xlntwtch

.your cough.The density wavered in jagged movements that drew out towards the borders of an organic, rectilinear shape.  Our fingers, the chosen ones, met at their respective ends, where fingerprint would crosshatch fingerprint, confusing identity in between.  We were children miming the motions of adults, quoting their language, their words, using their clothing as capes to fly into our own sense of adulthood, maturity.  We ran across time as if it were borrowed, inaccessible to reality, parallel systems that interacted only in surreal moments of passion, disillusionment.

I stacked the plates in the kitchen.  She made a soft, coughing sound from the be

.your cough. by ~slurpeesncigarettes

The suggester says: This builds a fantastic realistic scene from abstract descriptions.
It's a cross between poetry and prose, but lands on excellent prose.



Featured by *doodlerTM
One Down The man stood at the head of the classroom with his hands in his pockets, surveying the mass of cold faces, and asked, "Which of you would like to be the first to die?"
He watched patiently as no student raised his or her hand.
 The man had been sent as a last resort to save the class of "bad eggs". His methods were unconventional at best, but he saw no alternative.
 "No takers?" He asked calmly, stepping back then and taking a seat upon the teacher’s desk.
 No one replied.
“Okay.” He said, rubbing his hands together. “Who here has been in a fist fight within the last week?”
 Two thirds of the class raised their hands.
“How many of you initiated your fights?”
Two people put their hands down.
The man frowned. “How many of you were put in a hospital as result?”
Three more hands went down; the man let out a heavy breath.
 “Okay, put your hands down. Any smokers?”
Half of the student’s ha

One Down by ~flashingnumbers

An incredibly dark, but thought-provoking vignette.


Foreign Language


Featured by *lombregrise
Johannes' Prophecy in Old French - 1 to 31
Cume cumencerai l’Ans Mille que vieng apres l’An Mille
L’Ors seroie dedains le sanc
Que reguarderai les esteiles hui cunterai des ultimes
Que eintrerai dedeins le temple hui encuntrerai les marcheantz
Li Soverain seront changeorz et usurierz
Li Gleves defendra le Serpaint.

Mais li fuezs coverai
Ogne citez seroie Sodome et Gomorrhe
Et li enfes des enfant devenraient la nue ardente
Il leveront les ancienz estandardz.

2
Cume cumencerai l’Ans Mille que vieng apres l’An Mille
L’Hume avroie queriz les Cielz et la Terre et les Merz des siennes Bestes
Il ordonnerai
Il volerai les poveirz de Deu
Il ne conoistera

Johannes' Prophecy in Old French by ~sewandrere

~sewandrere wrote an excellent translation - adaptation of a mythic prophecy,
attributed to Jean de Vézelay, called "When the Millenium following that Millenium
will begin..."
If the existence of Jean is purely theoretical, and in particular his status of
"one of the 8 founders of the Order of the Temple" ; the work of ~sewandrere is
absolutely fantastic. I have no read a such good ancient french since my studies. This ancestor
of French language was spoken in the English court, for example.
And, last but not least, he wrote an English modern translation in the comments.
Take a moment to read it, and welcome back in time, in Jerusalem!



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Poetry


Featured by: `thetaoofchaos
just
you can't adequately
write about water
circles in the pond
during rain. just
watch. just listen.
just.

just by ~silvernium

Lao Tzu himself couldn't have
written it any better.



Featured by: `thetaoofchaos
our firstI have tended three summers of sticky okra
and watched the jalapenos shrivel to mulch,
shaped the grass into cups for my knees,
watched bees eddy around my head.
It's still deep enough in summer for me to hope
so I kneel, wrist deep in a watermelon,
pulling pulp fat with seeds from the middle.

When it takes - when I take - when you take
hold of me, like a sudden embedding,
I lose my balance, drop my fruit and my spoon,
startle the crows back onto their perches.

Was it enough to give the earth my blood for so long?
I get you, and though I know I've given enough
(my father's ashes help the squash to bloom)
you are so much to fulfi

our first by ~madhatterzwei

Intimate and contemplative,
this poem charms the reader with
its apparent honesty.




Prose


Featured by *xlntwtch
CurfewJanuary 26th 2011

'Were you there yesterday?'
I didn't need to ask where 'there' was-  it was obvious; I looked in the mirror at my hairdresser and nodded a little guiltily.  Yes, I was there, waving a flag, and chanting anti-government slogans with other Egyptians all of us clamoring for freedom. The hairdresser's eyes widened. I knew why and I resented it, 'my husband doesn't know,' I added as I stiffened my shoulders sitting up a little straighter, 'I went alone.'
'Why?'
'Because one more voice, when added to thousands more makes a difference,' I said passionately, my eyes flashing in the mirror, daring him to say

Curfew by ~Death-in-Crimson

Real life activities under a dictatorship
are wonderfully fictionalized by
this good writer.



Featured by *xlntwtch
LateSammy paced.

This had never happened before. And tonight, of all nights! He glanced at the clock, grimaced, and paced some more. Where was he?

Behind the curtain, he heard the chatter of the crowd, the beat of the music.

Marv the Magnificent, the "compere extraordinaire", strode up to Sammy and gave him a questioning look. Sammy answered with a shrug. Marv looked at his watch, wiped his brow, sipped from a tin hip-flask.

"It's now or never, Sam. Do or die. I believe you can do this on your own - but he'll be here yet."

Seeing the fear in his star attraction's eyes, Marv put a hand on Sammy's shoulder. "He'll be here yet", he repeated.

S

Late by ~monstroooo

The well-written suspense is palpable,
with a twist end that's very satisfactory.



Featured by *doodlerTM
The Hollow Hills"Why are the hills hollow?"

The young child's question was innocent, naive, and asked in an earnestness that could not be persuaded, no matter how much he wanted to reroute her questions to another day... if ever.

"These are special hills," he said finally when his daughter's antics grew more lively as she awaited her beloved father's question. "Each of the hills has a waiting place for one person, and one person alone.  When it's their time to go on the next...."

For a moment, his voice halted, his thoughts splintering as he thought not only of how to word the answer, but also the renewed sense of loss. "When it's their time, that person

The Hollow Hills by ~openmeadow

A bittersweet take on a
difficult question: where
do people go when they die?







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Saturday Spotlight for May 4th, 2013


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Today's featured deviant is:
:star: ~wh0rem0ans!:star:


Questions

 

1. Tell us a bit about yourself and your writing.

If someone takes half the water out of a glass of orange juice, the concentrated liquid is sweeter. Take all of the water out and the result is so sweet it causes an intense reaction, an unforgettable sensation.

An idea will cross my horizon, usually an image with an idea. The image is usually alien to the idea but I know they are important together. So I swirl it around, look at it from many angles. I try to figure out where, in my history, the image arose. Then comes an ‘Ah ha!” moment.

Once I know why it is important that this unrelated image tell the story of this idea, I begin to tell it to myself. And each time I tell it, I reduce it. When all the water is gone, the concentrate is intense and unforgettable to me.

Very nearly all my ‘writing’ is done in my head. I type the words, for the first time, into the Text box for Submissions. I edit there. I hit submit and somehow there is always something wrong with it. This happens several times, usually, and then I am satisfied. That’s how I make poetry.

2. How do you feel about dA as a literature community?

My poetry was never written down until I opened this second account on dA. I wanted to share the words I worked in my head but I was terrified. The early submissions felt like vulnerable bits of my soul. But, from the start, I was supported and encouraged. I gained confidence, I took risks, I experienced an evolving freedom of expression.

I enjoy the interactions with writers and readers here immensely, popping in several times a day to see comments or to read others’ work. Groups have no appeal for me whatsoever, as I am an introvert. I am not shy, though, so one to one, I am in my element. Community as a collection of individuals is precious to me and dA is the only literature site to which I belong. It’s all I ever needed.

P.S. This is too long to be called intense or unforgettable! Ha!

3. Are there any authors that have influenced your work?

Rainer Maria Rilke, especially “Letters to a Young Poet”
The "unholy trinity" of British poets: Byron, Keats and Shelley
John Donne, when he was Jack Donne and wrote, “The Flea”
Jay Knioum
`queenhrosie
Dr Clarissa Pinkola Estes: poet, Jungian analyst, but also author of Women Who Run with the Wolves
David Whyte
Joseph Decker
The Inklings
There are so many, too many to name all.

4. What do you consider to be your highest literary accomplishment?

I just began university and got a perfect score on the writing placement test, after being out of school for 35 years. But I would have to say that first DD will always be an incredible bright memory for me.

5. Have you ever written a piece that was "difficult?" Whether because it wasn't ready to be written or something too personal to write about? How do you deal with writing something like that?

I hope everyone has done that very thing. How do I do it? I once tried to make the references obscure with fantasy or myth symbolism. To sort of ‘half tell it’. Well, that’s useless. The blissing of such work is part catharsis and part healing, and neither occurs without vulnerability. There is a sweetness to honestly spilling a bit of your hidden shame and finding someone else who will say, ‘Me, too”.


Poetry


Single LadiesI want to spend a summer fortnight in the Everglades with LynnMarie.
I want to sleep all day and stay up all night, learning just one dance.
I want to dance like Kurt Hummel in the Glee "Single Ladies" video.
I want to learn every hair flip, finger waggle, hip thrust, every move.

I want to keep this incredible talent a tiny secret in my heart of hearts.
I want to keep it for a day when I have a true heart great-granddaughter.
I want to see the gleam in her eye when I invite her to share my secret.
I want to dance, dance for her, until we both cry gasping tears of laughter.

"Single Ladies" by ~wh0rem0ans


Who gives this woman?No one can,
     for she was free and wild
          before she left my womb,
Said her mama.

No one can,
     for she was free and wild
          before she let go my hand,
Said her daddy.

No one can
     bind the wind that is her breath
     trap the water that is her blood
     cage the earth that is her bones
     capture the fire that is her heart
Said her granny.

No one may give wha

"Who gives this woman?" by ~wh0rem0ans


WinterIn the dark night

of Winter,

Look up.

There are stars.

"Winter" by ~wh0rem0ans


daughterI asked
my
5 year old
daughter
Are you beautiful?

“You are, Mama!”

I asked
my
10 year old
daughter
Are you beautiful?

“Who cares, Mama?”

I asked
my
15 year old
daughter
Are you beautiful?

“My friend is, Mama.”

I asked
my
20 year old
daughter
Are you beautiful?

“No one is, Mama.”

I asked
my
25 year old
daughter
Are you beautiful?

“My lover is, Mama.”

I asked
my
30 year old
daughter
Are you beautiful?

“My baby is, Mama.”

I asked
my
35 year old
daughter
Are you beautiful?

“I don’t think so, Mama.”

I asked
my
40 year old
daught

"daughter" by ~wh0rem0ans




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Poetry


Suggested by: *homunculus888
Featured by: =TwilightPoetess

On Recursive ThoughtsThis curve of bone no more than
a whitened hive. Inside,
legs, jointed. How these feet catch
and scratch and cling,
a claw in each synapse,
a voice for each and every touch.
A why and why again.
A gauze of wings, held up,
a gauze before my eyes, a misted world,
those stick-dry veins blurred and close.
Somewhere the scent of venom,
the sharpness caught behind my skull.
Each needle-sting a thought and thought again,
a layering up, another string of words,
another cascade of loosened thoughts, a buzz
of voices with their tired whys.
One day I may open this hive-mouth
and watch the exodus go by.

On Recursive Thoughts by =Aconitum-Napellus

Bringing those pesky negative thoughts
to life with this beautiful extended metaphor,
=Aconitum-Napellus will leave readers
picking their jaws off the floor.



Featured by: =DrippingWords
We Are Only Made of DustThe world is not ours,
                 (but that doesn't stop us from wanting it)
Our bodies are not limitless; they do not last forever, though in this moment
                                                            ­                                              I swear, I almost feel infinite

There was a time when I thought words were immeasurable
Those being said, those already spoken, and those yet to be spoken
They are, were and would forever be endless

Some are exchanged lightly without thought, and others are as thunder, destructive and forceful,
but somehow it doesn't matter how they are said, and to whom;
As long as th

"We Are Only Made of Dust" by ~XxLonerEyesxX

A wonderfully written piece of literature,
this poem brings perspective to the reader while
engaging their imagination.



Prose


Suggested by: *SCFrankles
Featured by: =SilverInkblot


Dollar FiftyWhen I boarded the bus that gray Saturday afternoon, it was empty, aside from the bus driver and me. I handed him my dollar fifty fee and hurried back to my seat, clutching the bag in my arms carefully. As I sat down, he looked up and smiled, an open-mouthed grin that showed his stained teeth. The doors closed with a hydraulic hiss, and we were chugging down the street at a jerking pace.

As we drove, he kept up a one-sided conversation, talking about everything and nothing; the weather, previous passengers, the construction on the other side of town – the list went on. I had almost expected him to have a soft or high-pitched voice, as

Dollar Fifty by *dietcocaine

Suggester: "A disturbing study of a
possibly psychopathic personality."



Featured by *doodlerTM
This is Just Silly
The party, quite frankly, is crazy. I'd try to tell you how crazy it is, but words fail me. Stupendously crazy? Fantastically crazy? Just plain crazy? All of the crazy, put together in a blender? I just don't know.

Joe has just finished his masterpiece: Spock, making the 'shocker' sign with his hand, drawn in Magic Marker on your dining room table. Part of you wants to get rid of it; the other quite admires the skill of which the 'Spocker' was drawn.

Me? I'm a little off to the side, in the kitchen. Henry's making noodles in my cutlery drawer, and doing surprisingly well, for the implements he has at hand. I'm juggling; fruit, as a matter o

This Is Just Silly by ~Rhetoricism

As the title suggests, this story is "just
silly -" an amusing and entertaining read.



Featured by *xlntwtch
Ribs
Humans have 12 ribs on each side of their ribcage.
I know this because Madame counts ours every week.
Less than 12 and back of the line it is.

Carbs are bad, fats are worse, remember to eat less next time. Someone always cries.

Until today, my record was pristine.
"You have 10 ribs."
Truth is usually uncomfortable. I didn't cry like the others.

At home I went through my father's drawer. I pierced my fingers.
Found it.
It amazes me how sometimes, life just hands you everything you need.

"I see you cut back on the garbage." I've never seen her eat. "Well done".
I'm in the front again.

When they all left, she bent over, adjusti

Ribs
by ~fadingreverie

This vignette tells readers about the
world of ballerinas with great imaginative style.




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Daily Lit Deviations for May 2nd, 2013


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Poetry


Suggested by: *homunculus888
Featured by: =TwilightPoetess

prairie handsyou focused east and
bathed in sundrips,
took one look
towards the west
and crumbled
it.

you kept your head
forward and your gaze slipped
not, for these columns
do not shake.

and your gait sank,
and you sang.

you kept up
the best of
arcs and adorations,
latent heel
in active aspiration,
but had not
the grace for this
escape.

and with your hymn
you courted dusk.

prairie hands by ~skerd22

This beautiful poem by
~skerd22 brings the music
of the prairie to life with picturesque
descriptions and subtle metaphor.



Featured by: =LadyofGaerdon
The Melancholy Ballad of the Clockwork SoldierARGUMENT:
During the Victorian era, a young soldier is mortally wounded in battle. His body is restored using metal and clockwork parts. Although he survives (indeed, his new body effectively makes him immortal), he believes that he has become a monster, and is later denied the love of his dearest lady.

In youth, I was a handsome man
Who gave all thought to play,
Beloved of a maiden fair...
Then war took me away.

I travelled far across the sea
And entered earthly Hell.
Within a foreign land I fought,
And in that land I fell.

My body torn, my beauty scarred,
They said I'd not survive.
I stared into the face of Death -
But turned away alive.

The Melancholy Ballad of the Clockwork Soldier by *bookloverblue

Clever, haunting fixed-form
narrative poetry, the subject
is one to be pondered,
the narrator one to be pitied.



Suggested by *xlntwtch
Featured by =DrippingWords

Proper LightShe tied a garbage bag
around my neck
and let the length
of it flow down
the back of the creaky chair
I sat in. I looked
like a superhero
or a superweirdo
or a kid
who had a grandma
that knew how to
make things interesting.
She fetched
a pair of scissors,
and griped
'cause they weren't
her good clippers,
but couldn't figure
just where
she had put them.
I told her
to pipe it down--
quit fussing,
and how I wanted
her to make me look.
She laughed
and told me,
"We ain't in the proper light
for that, but we'll see
what I make of you
after we've had some coffee."
Thirty minutes later,
still dressed
in my plastic cape,
sitting in my chair
scooted too far
from the kitchen table
to rest my mug on
between sips,
but close enough
to the window
above the sink
where the light
was better,
she finally said
she was ready
to cut my hair.

Proper Light by `FuzzyHoser

Suggester says: "Just thinking
about this poem brings a smile
to my face. Try it yourself."



Prose


Featured by *doodlerTM
Blue EyesI love her.

My lips smirked as I watched her struggle beneath me. She was terrified, and I couldn’t help but bask in the ecstasy of the moment. I had a stunning creature in my arms, but I wish she understood; I just wanted to make her even more beautiful. She deserved to be the epitome of beauty, and I craved to help her rise to that pedestal.

The bluest of eyes stared at me with an intensity of fear that made me tremble with anticipation. Her body fell limp at a gradual passing of time, no longer fighting against my weight; quiescent. I stared at the motionless form beneath me, shuddering with awe at her mortal beauty. How could deat

Blue Eyes by *SMAdams

A frighteningly realistic snapshot
into the mind of a murderer.



Featured by *xlntwtch
Is that a bite mark?     “In here.” Holly pulled her friend into an alley with a crude wooden fence across the opening. “Give me a hand with this.” She grabbed one side of the dumpster. Victoria grabbed the other. Together they wrestled it over to the fence at the mouth of the alleyway.

    If they were lucky, that would hold against the pack of deadheads following them. She wished it was heavier. Maybe she could weigh it down with the loose bags of trash lying around. Holly started to ask for help again, but she stopped when she saw the way Victoria was cradling her arm.

    “Hey, you don’t look so good.”

    &ldq

Is that a bite mark? by =Tobaeus

This fine piece displays suspense
and compassion in one package,
including zombies.




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Daily Lit Deviations for May 1stth, 2013


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Poetry


Suggested by: *imaginative-lioness
Featured by: =DrippingWords

imaginaryoh darling, we will never be the same. in seven months i lost my jar of butterflies & glitter dust. now, i am rinsed in acid rain. in the wild i wore my antlered frame with pride beside the minnow lakes; i forced my legs to run with the wolves, but god, did i miscalculate.
we are never coming back, so let's put our formers to rest. i unveiled my baby flesh with liquor & sex sweat. i hear someone sing to me, & fall to me knees. beeswax & honey lifting me through the trees. my skin will never taste like saltwater. you'll never press your ear to me & hear the sea. i was your enigma, & you were my favorite mystery. but we are never returning, so

"imaginary" by *hazeltown

Suggester says: "Not only is
this piece absolutely beautifully
written, but this writer truly
deserves to have her work featured."



Suggested by *Concora
Featured by: =LadyofGaerdon

Open SeaI
was a
fawn caught in
headlights;
you
were
 a 
boulder on the
shoreline - a ghost in my dreams that's still breathing
                                                               W                                                           G
                                                                    I                        a                     &

Open Sea by *4sauce4

Suggester: Not only is the
formatting a treat, the words
within have a wistful beauty
about them, and the clever
diction retains a good sense
of rhythm throughout.



Featured by: =DrippingWords
no crow roadit was a benign hope,
this adroit affinity 
for love,
a haughty idea
that replaced old regimes
and tattered philosophies
and contradicted,
trippingly,
the hollow brevity
of life. 
the shortest distance
between two points
is a straight line, straight
as the crow flies.
there are stars overhead
even on the devil's shore
if you know how to look--
between the catalyst
of indolent calm
and reluctant bliss,
where the aesthetics
of wisdom
will ruin you. 
crown him with a tyranny
of mischief,
love him for it until
your heart beats sporadic
and bursts,
drowning you in prurient
scorn. 
regret
the moment
you met.  
there are no roads
here. 
sometimes she makes
her own--
long, winding things
that spiral
sinuous and shifting
like wind chimes twisting
on the breeze. 
they never end, but
merge infinitely, 
a spiderweb tracery
upon her soul. 
every pertinent lesson
repeats
like a cr

"no crow road" by *Pailei

Clever and witty, this poem takes
a cliché and breaks it, showing off
the writer's skill in a humble way.



Prose


Featured by: =SilverInkblot
FrecklesIt’s one of those nights. It seems like almost everything is worth talking about. Either that or we just can’t find a place to stop, which isn’t what either of us wants, anyway.
       We’re lying on the couch sometime in the night (if you asked the hour I could not tell) and all I can really do is enjoy his existence. I never really have to savor it because he’s always there. Not physically always, but always nonetheless. And he’s such a happy soul. It’s my favorite thing about him.
       And suddenly, inspiration rises up inside me. The best idea I’ve had since falling in love.
       Alri

Freckles by ~Tuliipiie

Something short and sweet for
your enjoyment. Sometimes the
smallest things are the most precious.



Featured by *xlntwtch
Seven Devils - Dance With A Devil  SEVEN DEVILS –  DANCE WITH A DEVIL

     The cold wind whipped through the near empty street as guests quickly walked into the large house, where music and laughter could be heard. He strolled through the crowd and up the steps of the house, glancing back at the guests he’d just past with a smug grin. While they would have to wait out in the cold until they were admitted, he had the pleasure of entering at his own will.

     He wore a black suit and overcoat, and his dark hair was slicked back. Were it not for his pale skin, white shirt, and the whites of his eyes that seemed to glow with a hunger for power, he would have ble

Seven Devils - Dance With a Devil by =AshATurner

A fine, short section of longer work
found in the "children and teens"
category, this is part of chapters
irresistibly well-written, full of hints
and subtly growing tension.




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